a stream of conciousness thing, if it's anything.

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Sunday, 18-Jan-2009 12:14:43

I was inspired to write this yesterday, enjoy.
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She writes these things, expresses these thoughts. Beautifully simple. They get lodged in the corners of the mind, Lost in the echoing places. Things like “I want to read something beautiful. I want to live something beautiful.” they stick, like ink in a pen, then flow, like blood, word blood, in the vanes of my mind. They prompt, gently coaxing, push aside the trivialities of the mundane and write. Write like the wind, let your sole express, not repress.

Post 2 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Sunday, 18-Jan-2009 16:01:41

I really like this piece. It's a bit deep; a brook or stream maybe. I especially like the use of similes and personification. Well done!

Post 3 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Monday, 19-Jan-2009 11:20:15

awe, thank you!